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| Quiz | Congo | 
| Quiz 4 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:Mayor Oshodi insured the voters that there was no reason for alarm. Answer: 
Mayor Oshodi assured the voters that there was no reason for alarm.
 [ words ]   I seem to be the only one capable of noticing that the Congo alternates between wide, placid areas and narrow, violent passages. Suggested Answer: 
The Congo alternates between wide, placid areas and narrow, violent passages.
 [ style ]   He titled his journal, Ajaja Olatunji, Boy on a Daring River Quest. Answer: 
He titled his journal, Ajaja Olatunji: Boy on a Daring River Quest.
 [ punctuation ]   "I can whistle as well as him," said one young tourist. Answer: 
"I can whistle as well as he can," said one young tourist.
 [ grammar ]   Features of the Congo are described in the new pamphlet. { use active voice } Suggested Answer: 
The new pamphlet describes features of the Congo.
 [clarity ( active voice ) ]   Let me tell ya, the forty-meter waterfall at Inga was impressive, even to this world-traveling writer. Suggested Answer: 
The forty-meter waterfall at Inga was impressive.
 [ style ]   To fasinate Katokwe, one must do something definitly noticable. Answer: 
To fascinate Katokwe, one must do something definitely noticeable.
 [ words ( spelling ) ]   It's no secret that Panga knows the river better than me. Answer: 
It's no secret that Panga knows the river better than I do.
 [ grammar ]   Watching the sunset on the Congo, Ajaja quoted from Genesis 1-18, "And he saw that it was good." Answer: 
Watching the sunset on the Congo, Ajaja quoted from Genesis 1:18: "And he saw that it was good."
 [ punctuation ]   In a narrow mountain pass the river current is increased. { use active voice } Answer: 
In a narrow mountain pass the river current increases.
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